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1. '20, november' could probably be the same font as the rest (still larger of course, but same typeface). The current font looks a bit weird.
2. Could the text be made to stand out more e.g. with a thicker white border?
3. The DDR logo looks a bit weird because it's kind of facing the wrong way, would be better on the left of the poster. Not sure if that's an option here, quite possibly not.
4. Asterisks as bullets look ok but you should move them down to centre them vertically with the (lower-case) text
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Date: 2004-10-10 07:16 pm (UTC)1. '20, november' could probably be the same font as the rest (still larger of course, but same typeface). The current font looks a bit weird.
2. Could the text be made to stand out more e.g. with a thicker white border?
3. The DDR logo looks a bit weird because it's kind of facing the wrong way, would be better on the left of the poster. Not sure if that's an option here, quite possibly not.
4. Asterisks as bullets look ok but you should move them down to centre them vertically with the (lower-case) text